For the Feedback Frenzy Contest:
I would like to know, what can be done to make this picture even better. I feel that there are some issues, and it's not quite there
. But I can't tell, what's the problem. (If there are other issues, please don't hesitate to tell me, too.
It started out as a sketch of two fighting water deer [Wikipedia]
in the marshes. But after doing a quick Speedpaint for the background, I tossed that idea away and painted a more peacefull scene. Maybe I'll do some fighting another time, though.
A week ago I didn't know about water deer and their peculiar tusks. They strike me as rather fierce-looking, and I like that
Hope you like it. Thoughts and critique are very welcome = )
Edit: Here is the promised fighting scene:
And some sketches I did prior to working on this: [link]